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Your bass

things to work on, switching up the beat of your drums. picking up their pace would be good.
and you bass CAN REACH bro. like put on a just barely audible subsonic pulse
DEEPER
with every hit of the bass drum. other than that your synths are great and the melody is entrancing :D

great synths

perfect synths and chords man, also quite a sick beat but you could probably switch it up to make it faster nearer to the climax.

Also that Bass NEEDS to ride deeper

DRUM LINE EDIT

your drum line feels like it is missing a beat at 0:45 .
the tempo feels weird and it might be too late to edit it but i think a 2X speed of the drum line or extra beats for it would really add to the energy.
i fuckin love all the chaoz btw xD

it's scarborough fair

i hear it too! it's like a techno vers though. this is so fiendish, i know you probs didn't know the song before xP

afraid?

throw in some more bass to your next track, it will actually define you more against the rest of the musicians. a deeper tone would make this more memorable, so dont be afraid to crush people with bass pulses.

TIMarbury responds:

uhh dunno what u mean by afraid. this really isn't a bassy song for a reason.

more coming soon!

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